Great... then crap..
No offence, but if you didn't have that last part in, your score would of probably been higher. It was a great fighting animation with really cool effects, but the ending was stupid and ruined any experience.
You lost points for
- the ending: bad bad BAD.
- everyone knows rock trumps electric types :P
Although like I said, the start was awesome. Good job on that bit.
This actually gave me chills dude :)
Thank you for making this! It was a very beautiful piece of work.
Your work is flawless as always!
I really hope you make another series.
So good I watched it twice in a row!
Not a fan of the start :P but it sets it up for MORTAL COMBAT! well.
Good job :)
Hi IRON MAN
Pretty good. :) I enjoyed it.
It wasn't much like Zero Punctuation at all though :P That's probably why no one said you ripped it off.
What... the... hell?
Very good submission :)
I like the art in it, the detail in the eyes is very nice. Although I think the transitions between slowmotion and fast paced action are too great. There should probably be a bit more fast paced action with less stoppage time inbetween.
But that's just me, i like hardcore action - heh.
Overall: very good :D
hah, at least you realise it stinks, which shows you know you could animate better.
To be honest though, it's really good. Especially good for your first submission. The sounds were good - albiet a little quiet at times, and couldnt hear what they were saying.
The graphics were quiet well. Animation was decent, you could do to work on the details a little more. And it was quite funny.
You did well :)
I wouldn't mind more!
Wow. I mean
Really really good dude. I just watched all episodes up untill this one. I will definatly be waiting for more.
Very beautiful series you got here. Quite poetic - I really thing it is understandable to those who have also never been in love - although I really do feel it. I know what it's like to be apart from someone you love. You have conveyed it really well.
I am looking forward to the last two.
I love Stephen Lynch, I reckon you should of done a bit more animating to it thought. You had good ideas with it thought - very literal. But a slightly lack of animation, the art is good though.
Keep at it :)
"The best part about this cartoon is that you are all too stupid to understand it."
Somehow I doubt that :P
I don't ever give mario cartoons any more than they deserve. Infact I don't really like him, so I am with you on that :P.
It's just you didn't put much effort into it really.
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